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Pokemon Benayla Version chapter six

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Sorry for this being later than intended, here's the sixth chapter.



As always, the characters are:

Ben(“Benayla”) Lagnese:
The Main Character, a Pokemon Trainer who is on his Journey across the state of Iowa trying to become a Pokemon Master.

Taiora:
Ben's Pikachu. His Starter Pokemon and companion.

Wormy:
Ben's newly evolved Metapod.

Harold:
Ben's Poliwag.

Shayla Maxwell:
Ben's Rival on his Journey and the one he's loved for years.

Eevee:
Shayla's Starter Pokemon.



Previously on Pokemon Benayla Version, after obtaining the Llama Badge Ben and his Pokemon head for West Des Moines. Before setting off they alongside Ben's Rival and her Pokemon stay at a nearby hotel, during the morning that follows Ben and Shayla start talking, but their conversation is “dropped in” on by Wormy.

After checking out they see Shayla entering a forest, despite the forest not being on the map Ben and Taiora follow her into it and end up getting attacked by a Golbat.

After a short conversation between our hero and his Pikachu they are ambushed yet again by an apparent friend of Shayla's who appears to know something about her that Ben doesn't. The two of them battle and Taiora emerges victorious.

After reaffirming his goals of the Pokemon League and Shayla's hand, Ben bids farewell to the Trainer he just battled and he and Taiora leave. Taiora asks his Trainer what the story on him and Shayla is and Ben answers that due to his feelings for her things haven't been all well between him and his one sided love. Ultimately it is revealed our hero has been dealing with a very deep conflict with her for years and years.

At the end of the path the two of them come across a Fossil and another Trainer battles them for it. After defeating his Trainer's second attacker Wormy evolves into Metapod and everyone makes it out of the woods in one piece, ready for whatever else life has in store for them.


Title: WAVING TO THE WIPE OUT!



After another long walk Ben and his Pokemon finally reach West Des Moines and locate the Water Park.



Ben: Well, here we are. Taiora, make yourself at home while I get directions to the Gym.

Taiora: Alright then.

(Harold unleashes himself from his Pokeball)

Harold: I'm coming too.

Taiora: What about Wormy?

Ben: I think it'd be best for Wormy to take it easy for the time being. Bye guys.

(He leaves and the two Pokemon hit the Lazy River)

Harold: Hey Taiora.

Taiora: What's up?

Harold: For some reason it doesn't feel like any of us are getting anywhere.

Taiora: What are you talking about?

Harold: I feel like at this rate we're never going to reach any of our goals. Don't you think we should be stronger by this point?

Taiora: You're not the one who went up against a Tauros.

Harold: And you're not the one who got their ass kicked by Abra.

Taiora: If you're the one who got defeated why don't you just speak for yourself?

Harold: I just feel like we're not as strong as we should be. Wanna do some training?

Taiora: In a Water Park? There are people around.

Harold: Not the point, up there.

(He looks over seeing some teenagers practicing surfing)

Taiora: You wanna catch a wave?

Harold: I'm not going to do it. YOU are.

Taiora: Hey! Then what are you going to do?

Harold: I'm going to help you.

(They walk over to the surfing area)

Harold: Yo man can you hook my friend up here?

Teenager: Huh?

Taiora: I'm here to surf.

Teenager: Is that right? Hey guys, Pikachu here's looking for a wave.

(They hastily grab Taiora and put him on a surf board)

Taiora: Alright, this isn't so bad.

Teenager: Not yet.

(He starts the wave machine and Taiora struggles to balance)

Taiora: Hey, that's not cool.

Teen: Hang on tight Pikachu.

Taiora(Swaying on the surf board): Damn you.

Harold: It's just like riding a bike, it's all about balance.

Taiora: I have no idea how to ride a bike you idiot!

(He begins standing and balances)

Teen: Looks like you've got nerve. Let's kick it up.

(The waves intensify)

Taiora: Hey, not cool.

(Harold begins firing Water Gun at Taiora)

Taiora: What are you doing?

Harold: This is what I'm talking about. Balancing under these conditions will help you with future battles. Focus!

Teen Boy: I like where your friend's head is at. Come on guys.

(They fire water guns at Taiora)

Taiora: Damn it!

Taiora thinking: This is exactly like my Gym Battle with that Tauros, except nothing was being fired at me.

(He maintains his composure and balances while dodging the water guns)

Harold: Yeah, that's what I'm talking about.

Teen boy: Well gentlemen it appears this Pikachu has determination. I like that. Let's give him the wave.

Other Teen boy: Yeah.

Harold: Get ready Taiora! Look the wave straight in the eye and show it just how Benayla you are!

Teen Boy: Yeah, why don't you go join him?

Harold: Huh?

(He throws Harold who lands on Taiora's back)

Taiora: What are you doing?

Harold: Get ready for the wave man!

Taiora: What? WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!?

(A giant wave is generated before them and Taiora turns around and is carried up by said wave)

Harold: See what I mean? This is truly the ultimate test of spirit Taiora.

Taiora: I'm gonna kill you Harold!!

(They are flung out of the surf area and bounce off a nearby pool and land on the grass, Harold's tail wrapped around Taiora's head)

Harold: That was the best thing I've ever done in my entire life.

Taiora:.........I am going to kick your ass~~!!

(Shayla's Eevee shows up)

Eevee: That....Was painful.

Taiora: Huh?

(He removes Harold from his head)

Eevee: You completely wiped out. You're all washed up.

Taiora: I'd like to see you do better.

Eevee: No thanks. I prefer my fur dry. Besides, I'd like to conserve my energy for my next battle. I'm going up against West Des Moines Gym's Pokemon very soon.

Taiora: So am I. I guess that means enduring this and that will make me stronger than you.

Eevee: Come again?! The fact that you wiped out now means you won't do so well against the Gym Leader!

Taiora: Wanna see how well I'll do against YOU!

Ben/Shayla: THAT'S ENOUGH! BOTH OF YOU!

(They both appear)

Shayla: No offense but I think your Pokemon need work. Seriously.

Taiora: Who asked you anyway?!

Harold: Yeah.

Ben: Come on you guys.

Taiora: Hey! Don't you have anything to say?

Ben(Looks at Shayla): I guess we'll meet again around the Gym.

Shayla: Yeah....

(She and Eevee leave)

Harold: What was that?

Ben: What?

Taiora: She insults us and you just said THAT?

Ben: I'm not going to argue with her.

Harold: And why.....

Taiora thinking(Narrows eyes): So THAT'S how it is.

Ben: Anyway, let's take a lunch break and then challenge West Des Moines Pokemon Gym.

Taiora: Fine.

(Harold is returned to his Pokeball)

Taiora: Hey Benayla.

Ben: What?

Taiora: Why do you put up with Shayla like that?

Ben: You already know the answer.

Taiora: So then, how long has it been like this?

Ben: Never mind. Come on.

(They leave)



And after a wipe out at West Des Moines Water Park Taiora obtains more incite on the relationship between his Trainer and their Rival. Find out what else awaits Ben and Taiora in the next chapter of Pokemon Benayla Version.


To Be Continued
The shortest chapter in the series so far. Enjoy. 
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